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一次愉快的旅行

【写作要求】

Andy春节期间去了南京,请你根据下面的提示,帮他写一个游记。要求:不少于 70词(不包括所给的开头和结尾);覆盖给出的要点。

Place: Nanjing

Time: during the Spring Festival

People: my parents and I

Some details: visit the Confucius Temple;

a boat trip along Qinhuai River, listen to Kunqu Opera;

climb Zijin Mountain, enjoy natural beauty

Feelings: tired but excited

I went to Nanjing with my parents during the Spring Festival. I had a wonderful time there.

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It was a wonderful trip. I hope I can go to Nanjing again some day.

【佳作欣赏】

I went to Nanjing with my parents during the Spring Festival. I had a wonderful time there.

There were lots of things to see and to do in Nanjing. The best part was visiting the Confucius Temple. We learnt a lot about Chinese history there. And we also took a boat trip along Qinhuai River. On the trip, we listened to Kunqu Opera. It was amazing! The next day, we climbed Zijin Mountain. It was great to enjoy natural beauty on top of the mountain. I felt tired but excited.

It was a wonderful trip. I hope I can go to Nanjing again some day.