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爱护环境,保护鸟类!

【作文要求】

根据图示,写一篇 80词左右的短文。要求故事完整,句子通顺,内容与图片相符。

参考词汇: newspaper(报纸), bird(鸟), nature(自然)

【写作指导】

分析:该例四幅图画描述的是一位先生保护动物的故事,内容贴近学生的生活实际,有利于对学生进行保护生态平衡、保护地球环境的教育。内容要点是:

1)看报( Let Birds Fly);

2)上山去放飞笼中鸟;

3)提着空笼返家;

4)惊奇地发现鸟儿重飞回笼。

通过观图、分析、判断,列出了要点,可写草稿,再进行润色,注意运用简单的、熟悉的句型结构,检查要点有无遗漏,注意拼写、词汇、语法及搭配上是否有误。

【佳作欣赏】

One day my uncle was reading a newspaper and learned that birds were our friends. We should get alone well with them. He looked at his nice bird in the cage, and decided to let it fly back homenature. He took the cage with the bird in it and went to a little hill near his house by bike. He went home with the empty cage. When he got back, he sat in a chair and had a rest. A moment later, to his surprise, he found the bird back in the cage.