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英语作文:你业余时间还去上各种辅导班吗?

【情景导入】

现在,社会上补习机构火爆,在各种媒体上,我们经常可以看到“名师名校”、“个性化教学”、“终极押题”、“秒杀中考”等广告词。你相信这样的宣传吗?为此,你所在的学习小组针对这一社会现象,围绕“课余时间我们应该更多地去做什么才能够得到全面的发展”展开了讨 论,最终大家形成了以下的观点: 1. a waste of time or money... 2. more time to read, do sports or take social activities... 3. become more creative...

请你根据同学们的上述观点,并结合自己的亲身体验,就此问题陈述自己的看法,内容必须包含以下要点:

1. Would you like to take after-school classes? Why or why not? ( Please give 3 reasons.)

2. What would you like to do in your spare time?

3. Please tell us one of your stories of this kind of experience.

要求: 1. 词数 80左右; 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。

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【写作指导】

(一)审题

本篇作文考查的体裁为议论文。要求利用所给的信息,从学生的全面发展的角度去看待社会上的补习班。然后写出你个人的观点。注意运用正确的时态,以一般现在时态为主。

(二)列举写作要点

1. 描写你上补习班的经历。

2. 写出自己在课余时间的爱好。

3. 写出自己的亲身体会:补习经历。

4. 发表自己的看法:课余时间我们该做什么,才有利于学生的全面发展。

(三)列举重点短语和句型

重点短语: a waste of timeused to, spend time doing, play sports, fall behind, in the spare time, learn by using

重点句型: It seems that many students go to take after-school classes, but I think it's just a waste of time.

I used to go to different kinds of these classes, too.

Learning by using is a real practice. I have benefited a lot from it.

【佳作欣赏】

It seems that many students go to take after-school classes, but I think it's just a waste of time. I used to go to different kinds of these classes, too. But later I realized I couldn't do that anymore. I began to spend more time reading, playing sports and taking some social activities. Meanwhile, I didn't fall behind others in study.

I prefer to have time to enjoy the nature. It's a good way to know about the world. So I often put my spare time to good use by watching animals, plants, rocks... around my city. I still remember that day I went to the Forest Park this spring! And I found a few plants appearing in my biology books. It offered me a chance to deepen my understanding of my textbooks.

Learning by using is a real practice. I have benefited a lot from it. Now I am more creative and confident than those who are always involved in taking after-school classes.