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书面表达: Great changes have taken place in our city!

【作文要求】

众所周知,现在中国正发生着日新月异的变化。请你根据下面的要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的城市近几年来的变化。并谈谈你对这些变化的看法。词数 80词左右。开头不计入单词总数。

要点: 1. 城市规模上的变化( big, wide, tall

2. 城市功能的完善( park, square

3. 人口从农村迁往城市( move, population

4. 请你谈谈对城市变化的看法或建议。

In China, the great changes are taking place in the cities.

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【写作指导】

(一)审题

本篇作文的体裁为应用文。介绍城市的变化。主要用一般现在时,同时可用一些现在进行时表达城市正在发展的状态。

(二)列举写作要点

1. 城市规模上的变化;

2. 城市功能的完善;

3. 人口从农村迁往城市;

4. 自己的观点。

(三)列出重点短语和句型

bigger and bigger, move to, the population of, with the development of, I think, make... more beautiful

【佳作欣赏】

In China, the great changes are taking place in our city.

Our city are becoming bigger and bigger. The roads and the streets there are very wide. There are many tall buildings evrywhere in our city. There are also many beautiful parks and squares. Many people in the countries are moving to our city, so the population of the city is becoming larger and larger.

With the development of the city, people's life is getting better and better. Buses and cars on the road are becoming more and more, so air pollution is becoming more and more serious in the city. I think we must do something to stop pollution and make our city more beautiful.