【情景导入】

“眼睛一闭一睁，一天过去了，眼睛一闭不睁，一辈子就过去了。”是啊，人这一辈子是多么的短暂，而身体是革命的本钱。我们应追求一个健康的身体。来吧！同学们！锻炼好自己的身体吧！“左三圈，右三圈……”

【作文要求】

健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。

提示： 1. 要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；

2. 每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；

3. 不要工作太晚，要早休息。

要求： 1. 短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；

2. 80～ 100词左右；

3. 开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad (Mum),

You're so busy everyday that you don't pay much attention to your health.

________________________________________________________________________

Your loving son (daughter)

【写作指导】

（一）审题

本篇作文考查的体裁为话题作文，要求根据文章的提示内容，给父母写一封信，给他们一些保持身体健康的方法与建议。

（二）列举写作要点

1. 告诉父母，自己很担心他们的身体健康。

2. 给他们一些保持身体健康的方法与建议:

( 1)要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；

( 2)每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；

( 3)饮食要健康；

( 4)不要工作太晚，要早休息。

3. 希望父母接受自己的建议，祝他们身体健康！

（三）列出重点短语和句型

pay attention to, be worried about, all the time, far from, Why not, had better, take exercise, at least, once a week, what's more, it's necessary to..., stay up, have enough sleep, I really wish you healthy!

【佳作欣赏】

Dear Dad（ Mom）,

You're so busy everyday that you don't pay much attention to your health. I'm worried about your health all the time. I'd like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn't far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You'd better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. What’s more, it's necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad（ Mom）, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)