【情景导入】

在日常生活中你经常帮助别人吗？你是如何去帮助的呢？你们学校每年都开展学习雷锋精神的活动吗？活动是如何开展的呢？一起来进入今天的学习课堂吧！

【作文要求】

今年我市深入开展了“学习雷锋精神，共创文明城区”的活动。在 3月 5日学雷锋纪念日这天，你校组织志愿者去敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。假如你是市七中学生张华，请你将活动情况介绍给美国朋友 Ben，与他分享你的美好经历。（活动内容见下表）

活动时间： 3月 5日

活动地点：广安敬老院( Guang’ an Nursing Home)

参加人员：学校志愿者 (volunteer)

活动形式：

1. 送去鲜花和水果

2. 帮助打扫卫生

3. 陪老人聊天( chat with sb.)、唱歌、跳舞

4. ……

活动感想：关爱( care for)老人( the elderly people)、尊重 (respect)老人

要求：

1. 短文应包括表中所有的要点，可适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；

3. 文章不低于 80词。开头、结尾已给出。

Dear Ben,

Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5 th March in our school.

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If you have chance in China, I hope you can join us.

Yours,

Zhang Hua

【写作指导】

（一）审题

本篇作文考查的体裁为记叙文，要求根据表格信息，介绍学生们在广安敬老院的一些活动。然后写出你个人的活动感想。

（二）列举写作要点

1.总体介绍自己的活动： went to Guang’ an Nursing Home.

2.细致描述做了哪些事情： gave flowers and fruit; did some cleaning; chatted with them…

3.谈论自己的感受： care for… respect…

（三）列举重点短语和句型

went to Guang’ an Nursing Home. gave flowers and fruit; did some cleaning; chatted with them… care for; When the old people saw us, they were very happy.

【佳作欣赏】

Dear Ben,

Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5 th March in our school. We, the volunteers went to Guang'an Nursing Home and did many things for the old people there.

When the old people saw us, they were very happy. We gave them lots of flowers and fruits. We did some cleaning for them. After that we chatted with them. We talked very happily. Some of us sang great songs for them, and others danced. The old people told us old stories. We wished them good luck. All of us had a wonderful time there.

I felt happy that I cared for the elderly people and show our respect to them. If I have another chance to go there, I will take it.

Do you have some volunteer work? Please tell me in your next letter.

Yours,

Zhang Hua