【情景导入】快乐的暑假已经到来，在这个假期中，你有什么打算呢？愿意把你的想法和我们一起分享吗？我们先来分享下面这位同学是怎么过暑假的。

【佳作欣赏】

My holiday will be happy!

July 4 th, 2012

Dear Harry,

Summer holiday comes. How happy I am! I can do many things that I like. I'm going to have a trip to Hainan with my parents by air. I'm sure it will have a lot of fun! I'll also do some studies to improve my math, because I am a little weak in it. Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning room.

My plan is nice, isn't it? Please write back soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【作文点评】

本文小作者思路非常清晰。文章表达完整，语句通顺，时态运用得当。把整个的假期安排在短短几十个字就能全部表达出来，是一篇较为成功的作文。

【追踪练习】

愉快的国庆节过去了，请以“ My vacation”为题写一篇作文，谈谈你在国庆节中做了哪些事情。

参考词汇： National Day(国庆节)， a seven-day vacation(七天假期)， places of great interest(名胜), think about, go fishing…

要求：字迹工整，语句通顺，字数在 60— 80之间。

【佳作欣赏】

National Day was over. We had a seven-day vacation. I couldn't decide where to go at first. I wanted to visit many places of great interest in china. My parents asked me to think about it, and finally I decided to go to the Great Wall. The Great Wall was very famous in the world. Many foreigners came to China to visit it every year. When I got there, I was amazing. How tall and wide the wall is. When I returned, I relaxed at home one or two days. Then I went fishing because I liked fishing. How happy the holiday was.

同学们，你的假期是如何度过的呢？动动你的手，发起讨论吧！

My vacation

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