每一个家庭都会有许多的家务事情要做，父母每天除了工作还要做一些家庭的琐事，作为学生我们也应该为家庭做一些事情，你说对吗？

【作文要求】

请以“家务”为主线写一篇英语作文。

提示：你经常在家里做哪些家务，有什么样的体会。假期就快到了，你打算在暑假为家里做哪些事情呢？字数在 80— 100字。语句要通顺，意思连贯。

【佳作欣赏】

学生范文 1

Every family has lots of housework, so we all should learn to do some. I often try my best to help my parents with housework. For example, I wash bowls after meals every day. Besides, I often clean my room as well as my parents '. I feel very proud of myself for doing these. Because I can not only give my parents more time to rest but also learn some life skills by doing this. I think it is good for both my parents and me. My parents are very satisfied with what I have done, which encourages me to go on doing some housework as usual. What's more, I decide to try some now housework during the summer vacation, such as cooking, washing clothes and so on.

【名师点评】

文章观点正确，完全符合题目要求。 So， for example， besides， because， what's more等词的有效运用使文章语意连贯，过渡自然。语言简洁明了，思路清晰。此外，文章还准确地运用复合句“ My parents are very satisfied with what I have done, which encourages me to go on doing some housework”，为文章增色不少。

学生范文 2

There is a lot of housework in every family. And it always takes us lots of time to do housework, so each one in the family should offer to help deal with it.

As all the housework in my family is usually done by my Mum, I often help her do some easy housework like washing the dishes after meals, watering flowers and so on. Though it seems simple, it is not easy to do them well. This makes me know how tired my Mum is everyday to make the house tidy and clean. So I plan to learn to cook meals for my family in order to give my Mum more time to relax.

【名师点评】

文章观点正确，要点齐全， so， as， though， this等词很好地将上下文紧密地连接在一起使文章结构紧凑，逻辑性强。准确运用了从句、被动语态等多种句式结构，如文中的” As all the housework in my family is usually done by my Mum”、“ This makes me know how tired my Mum is everyday to make the house tidy and clean”等，使文章语言丰富，表达方式多样。