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这些节日你 high在其中了吗?

【情景导入】

我们国家有许多传统的节日,你最喜欢哪个节日呢?在节日里你通常都做哪些事情呢?让我们一起来看看下面介绍的是什么节日吧!

假设你是王平,你的英国朋友 Harry正在学习汉语。想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据所给的图画和提示,给 Harry写一封 E-mail,向他介绍我国主要传统节日的情况,并告诉他你最喜欢的节日以及喜欢的理由。

Spring Festival

Mid-autumn Festival

【作文要求】

1. 作文要包括:以上两个节日的时间,含义(家人团聚的日子)及主要活动; 你最喜欢的节日(包括传统和非传统节日)及喜欢的理由。

2.参考词汇: lunar(阴历), play firecrackers(放爆竹), lucky money(压岁钱), Mooncake(月饼)

3.词数:不少于 80词。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

Dear Harry,

How are you? I'm really glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festival__________________.

【佳作欣赏】

学生范文 1

Dear Harry,

How are you? I'm really glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. Now I will tell you something about it. Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It is on lunar January 1 st. On New Year's Eve, every family will play firecrackers and parents will give lucky money to children. Another important day is Mid-autumn Festival. Family will sit together and eat mooncakes. When they watch the moon at night, maybe grandparents will tell their grandchildren the story of Chang'e. It is on lunar August 15 th. For the two festivals, family will get together. So all the people are very happy during those days.

My favorite festival is Mid-autumn Festival, because I love the beautiful and bright moon. The mooncakes are also very delicious.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Wang Ping

【名师点评】

本文结构十分清晰,作者在第一段里先分别介绍了中国的 2个传统节日,最后介绍了他们的共同点。这样使文章简洁明了,从而也避免了重复。作者大多使用简单句来描写所有要点,全文叙述完整,过度自然,是一篇非常好的范文。

学生范文 2

Dear Harry,

How are you? I'm really glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It usually comes on lunar January 1 st. The celebration actually starts on New Year's Eve with the family when the whole family come together for a big dinner. On the early morning the next day, January 1 st of lunar, every family may go out to play firecrackers to let the old year go and welcome the new year.

Mid-autumn Festival is also a traditional festival, it usually comes in September or October. That is on lunar August 15 th. We all like to buy different kinds of delicious mooncakes. If it is fine, most people will go to the open air to watch the moon and eat the mooncakes.

My favorite traditional festival is Spring Festival because I can get lots of lucky money from my parents and grandparents.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Wang Ping

【名师点评】

作者巧妙的把参考词融入到文章中,完整的叙述了 2个节日的时间、含义及主要活动。最后说明了自己喜欢的节日和原因。本文内容充实,衔接自然,前后连贯,条理清楚。另外作者文笔优美,句式多变,可见作者具有较强的语言运用和组织能力。