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请保护好我们的眼睛!

眼睛,是“心灵的窗户”,它能让我们分辨美与丑,善与恶;能让我们感受树是多么的绿。瞧!花儿是那么的鲜艳。拥有一双健康的健康,你就能感受到世界是多么美好呀!把拥有眼睛的每一天看作是你将失去光明的前一天。爱护你的眼睛吧!

【作文要求】

六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。请你结合实际写一篇题目为《如何保护眼睛》的征文稿,内容要包括:

1. 保护眼睛的重要性;

2. 保护眼睛的具体措施;

①不要长时间看书报;

②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书;

③坚持做眼保健操。

④……

注意:词数 80~ 100词;不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥。

【佳作欣赏】

学生范文 1

How to Protect Our Eyes

It's important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But now more and more students wear glasses. They can see the blackboard clearly with the help of glasses.

So we must do something to protect our eyes. When you read books or newspapers for about an hour, you must stop to have a rest. Don't read in dim light or in the sun. Reading in a moving car is also bad for your eyes. Doing eye-exercises is another way to protect your eyes. Remember to do eye-exercises every day. You'd better not stay up late, or your eyes can't get a good rest.

As the saying goes: Eyes are the windows of our mind. Let's protect our eyes from now on.

【名师点评】

该文信息表达全面,第一段写了眼睛的重要性及不保护眼睛的后果。第二段 So we must do something to protect our eyes很自然地引出下文。" Doing eye-exercises is another way to protect your eyes"一句使文章增色不少。连词的使用使文章结构严谨紧凑。短语使用得当。

学生范文 2

How to Protect Our Eyes

Eyes are windows of the soul. It's very important for everyone to keep good eyesight. Here's some advice on how to protect our eyes.

Firstly, you shouldn't read books or newspapers for a long time. When reading, you should keep the book about one foot away from your eyes. Secondly, don't read in dim light or in the sun. Thirdly, remember to do eye-exercises every day, which can help you keep good eyesight.

I'm sure you'll have bright eyes, if you obey the rules above.

【名师点评】

该文的用语简洁明了,思路清晰。" Here's some advice on how to protect our eyes"引出下文,过渡自然。" Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly"的使用,使文章结构清晰,条理自然,没有遗漏要点。

学生范文 3

How to Protect Our Eyes

We all know that eyes are the window of the soul. We see nothing without eyes. So eyes are very important for us. We must protect them carefully. Do you know how to protect you eyes?

First, don't keep your eyes working for a long time. You'd better have a rest after you have studied for about an hour. Second, don't read in a strong or poor light. Reading in bed or in a morning car is also bad for your eyes. At last, remember to do eye-exercises every day.

If you keep on doing so, your world will be colorful for ever.

【名师点评】

该文开篇直接点题," We see nothing without eyes"说明眼睛的重要性。利用一个问句" Do you know how to protect your eyes?"引出下文,行文流畅。有效地使用连词,如:" first, second, third, or"等来分步写出保护眼睛的措施。全文结构紧凑,要点全面,句式多变,完全达到了预期的写作目的。