生活中,我们有家人的无微不至的关怀和照顾;学习中,我们有老师和同学的热心的帮忙。每天的学习和生活我们需要感谢的人很多,我们也应该懂得感恩,学会感恩。现在你就拿起手中的笔,写出自己的感受吧!
【作文要求】
1. 把题目补充完整。
2. 把你最想说的话说出来,如果文章中出现人名或者校名用 Huanghai和 Tianming Middle School代替。
3.字数在 60— 80字。语句要通顺,意思连贯。
【佳作欣赏】
I should thank my mother
In my life, I think I should thank my mother forever. My mother is very busy every day. She does all the housework in my family and works hard in the factory. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. When I am ill, she always looks after me carefully. In a word, not only will I thank my mother for giving me life, but also I’ ll thank her for helping me, teaching me, knowledge and how to person. At last, I want to say,“ Mom, I love you.”
【名师点评】
本文内容切题,层次清楚,语言流畅,标点符号运用准确,无语法错误,感情表达得真实自然。通过平时母亲的忙碌和对自己的关心来表现出母爱的伟大。最后一句也是点睛之笔,表达小作者对母亲的诚挚的爱。本篇是一篇难得的佳作。